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"________!!!!!" You sighed, slowly closing your favorite book. You knew the owner of that voice so you really had no reason to be mad at him. I mean he was one of your closest friends.

"Yes, what is it Gilbert?" You asked the albino once he made it over to you, giving you his ever present smirk.

"I vas vondering if you vanted to join me for dinner tonight at my place." You failed to notice the small shade of pink forming on his face after he asked.

"Sure! Is Ludwig joining us again?" He flinched.

"NEIN!!! Uh......I mean no. He's, um....going to go to Feli's house to do some project, or somezhing."

"Oh, okay! So when should I come over?"

"Just meet me by zhe school gates und we'll valk zhere. I'll let you call your parents once ve get home." You nodded your head as Gilbert got ready to turn and leave.

" 'Kay, see you then!" You shot up the moment you heard the bell ring, "Bye Gilbert!" He waved after you.

"Bye ________!!" Once you were inside the building Gilbert did a quick fist pump.

"She said yes! Gilbird she said yes!" The little bird tweeted to it's master and flapped it's small wings. Gilbird was happy that his master was happy.

(Time skip~!)

You hummed a small random tune as you headed towards the school gates. You just couldn't wait to go over to your BFF's place. Since you were little you, Gilbert, and Ludwig have been really close friends. You all would tell stories to each other, and play games, it was just great! But now that you all were in high school things have started changing between you three. You were still friends with them, but lately the Beilschmidt brothers have been acting a little odd around you. You would notice how the atmosphere would change once you were alone with the both of them or how they seemed to glare at each other once one of the bro's entered the room without the others knowing about it. It was so weird! What was going on with them?!

When you finally reached the gates, you noticed how Gilbert was slightly moving his head around. When you walked closer you finally realized he was just head banging to some heavy metal (although he couldn't do much of it with Gilbird sitting on his head). You stood by his side and waited for him to see you. When he sensed someone was near him, he slowly opened his eyes and nearly jumped in surprise at how close your face was to his.
"Aaahhh! __-________, don't do zhat!" You laughed at his facial expression. It looked like a weird mix of fright, glee, and embarrassment.

"Sorry Gilbert, but it was just the perfect moment. I couldn't resist~!" The Prussian gave you a mock glare, but ended up laughing in the end.

"Ja, you're right. I vould have done zhe same zhing if I vere in your position, kesese~!"
"I know!" You grabbed his hand, making him blush at the contact, and headed towards his place, "come on Gil, let's go! I'm starvin'." He laughed once more and squeezed your hand, gently.

"Okay, meine Frau~!"

(Time skip~! Again!)

Once you both finally reached the Beilschmidt residence you both quickly walked in, laughing about old memories.

"-und zhen you tripped und fell into zhat mud pit! Zhat vas hilarious!"

"Oh yeah?! What about that time you ran into the kitchen table and spilt all that glue onto your head. Your grandfather had to 'really' dig into your hair just to find the clumps of glue! Poor man; took him nearly six hours just to find it all."

"Hey, don't judge zhe awesomeness zhat is my hair! I mean so vhat if it's white?! It makes me look sexy!" To add emphasis, he ran his fingers through his snow white hair.

"Gilbert, until the fifth hour your grandfather started debating whether or not to just shave your head."

"Vhat?! How do you know zhis?!" You giggled.

"H-he told me! Ah man, the image of you being bald was hilarious....IT STILL IS! HAHAHAHAHAH!" Gilbert pouted. You noticed this and pinched his cheek.

"Oh Gilbert, don't be like that. I'm sure it would have grown back." You chuckled; Gilbert started frowning.

"Okay, okay! Come on, let's just get back to reality and start cooking, huh?" He sighed and wrapped his arm around your waist.

"Alright, but you go sit in zhe living room. I'm going to be zhe one making dinner for us." You blinked. Gilbert's never done this before. I mean he's always made Ludwig cook. It was never the other way around. Kinda made you wonder if Gilbert even 'knew' how to cook in the first place.

"Um, sure Gilbert." He smiled warmly at you and turned you towards the couch.

"Sit here und vait; you can also vatch tv if you like. Oh, und don't forget to call your parents." You nodded you head, trying to get over the fluttering feeling you got once Gilbert smiled at you, and brought out your phone. Once Gilbert left the room, and the phone was pressed to your ear, you both failed to notice the door opening and closing.

(Moments later)

Gilbert smirked in triumph. Finally! The woman he loved was alone with him at his house and his brother wasn't there to stop any of his advances. It was perfect! Now all he had to do was have a nice, calm dinner with her, and then slowly woo her into his arms. Gilbert grabbed the two dinner plates and walked out of the kitchen.

"Dinner's ready~!"

"Oh gut, ________ und I vere starting to vonder if you needed any help in zhere." Gilbert blanched. Oh you have got to be kidding me. Ludwig sat beside you with a small smirk directed towards his brother. Gilbert twitched in annoyance, but not without making sure he placed the plates onto table and took a seat on your other side. You flinched as the two gave each other some sort of look. There it was again. That change in the atmosphere. What the heck was wrong with these two?!

"Uhh..." They both turned to watch as you stood from your seat.

"Vhat's wrong, meine Frau?" They both asked.

"Uh, i'm gonna go and wash my hands. While I was waiting for Gilbert to finish making dinner, I noticed that my lip gloss exploded inside my bag. Of course I noticed too late and touched the stuff, so um....yeah i'll be right back!" You quickly ran into the bathroom to leave the two alone. You had to think for a sec.

(With them)

They both watched you run into the bathroom. Well that was odd. But right now they had other matters to attend to.

"Vhat zhe h*** are you doing here?!" Gilbert whispered harshly towards his brother. Ludwig glared back at him.

"Idiot. Don't you remember? I live here too, so of course i'm going to come back." Gilbert scoffed.

"Not vhat I meant, smart a**, I meant vhy are you even here? I thought Francis und Toni vere.....'watching' over you." It was Ludwigs turn to scoff.

"Vatch? As in jump me out of nowhere und try to keep me from coming home? You know Bruder, your biggest mistake vas having Francis do your dirty vork. Toni vas a difficult one, but Francis....vell let's just say, once I found zhe right tools, he started squealing like a disgusting pig." The air grew more tense. If you didn't come back soon, these two would start going at each others throats.

"Stay avay from meine Frau." Ludwig growled out.

"Tch, your frau? I zhink you mean MEINE Frau." They both heard the bathroom door slam open.

"Okay, i'm back." They both gave you a bright smile, acting as if nothing happened.

"Oh good! Now let's eat up~! Ludwig you can go und get your own plate." Said man gave a low growl and went into the kitchen. Dinner was going to be very awkward, you just knew it.


The Beilschmidt brothers each stood next to you as you stood outside of your door. After dinner they had decided to walk you home since it was so late out. Neither of them trusted the other with you so they both ended up walking you home, which was kinda fun, although they'd never admit it.

"Thanks guys, I had a really great time tonight."

"Ja, ve did too, didn't ve Gilbert?"

"Ja! It vas just awesome!" You smiled and went to reach for the door knob.

"________, vait." They both said. You turned to ask them what they wanted, when the most surprising thing happened. They both stood infront of you and turned their heads, each giving you a kiss on the cheek. You blushed crimson. Well you weren't expecting that (not like you minded either)!

"Gute Nacht, meine Frau." They whispered softly into your ear. After they stood at least several inches from you, they quickly turned around and started heading home. You watched as the two of them walked away. As you turned back to open the door, a thought occurred to you. 'You know, they've been calling me 'meine Frau' throughout this whole day. I wonder what that means.' You thought about it some more, and shrugged. 'Oh well, i'll ask them what it means tomorrow.' You slowly walked inside your home and were instantly greeted by your parents, who were just happy to see you home safely once again.

(With them)

The walk home was quiet for these two again. No one else was out, not even the dogs who usually slept outside! It was just too quiet. Well at least it was until Gilbert broke the endless silence.

"You know I vill get her next time, bro. Vhen you're not around at all. So just you vait. She vill be mine." Ludwig gave his brother a small smirk. If anyone was going to have you, it would be him.

"Right. Ve'll see, bruder. Ve'll see." Looks like another night of planning for these two.
Hmm, I feel like this story is lacking in something. I'm not sure what.....oh well! I'll change it later, maybe. Anyways I hope you enjoyed the story!

Picture: Not mine.

Sibling Rivalry 2: Part 1/2: [link] (It's the next chapter, peoples!!! :D)
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3L3M3NTAL-BLAD3 Featured By Owner May 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Mein = Mine (I Think)

Frau = Lady (I Think)
StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Prussia is the answer to everything! Choose Prussia!
Kate-Seacliff Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*helps Toni and Francis jump Ludwig*
CrazilyDeranged Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] How does one choose?
HandsomeHenry123 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015!!!I love this!
snow-master286 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
If they both kissed me on the cheek I think I would run through my door instead of opening it X)
edriannekirby Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Writer
Ahh so fluffy!
lilsillyb Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I almost busted out laughing when I read the bald part because I actually imagined him bald. XD
g6force Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
**flips table** I LOVE DIS!
I've read all 3, and I NEED PART 4!!!!
please?????? **makes prussian puppy dog eyes at you**
DoremiSanyouluv Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
PRUSSIA I CHOOSE YOU *throws hetaball* XD
rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Artist
Of course you choose prussia,, our sexy albino prussian of awesomeness, the king of awesome.
DoremiSanyouluv Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
the ultimate king of awesome
rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Artist
the most awesome king of awesome.
FiWithASmile Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So cute!!!!!
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
........i can't flippin' choose!!!!!! *flips table* they're both too smexy!!!! *has China-like freak out, except it's more intense and hardcore. breaks through cement and steel walls* i can't bloody choose!!!! i'm going to hide out in America's house. goodbye!!!! *walks off. Gil and Luddy are completely freaked out and cowering under a table. turn to look at each other*
Gil: "Umm.."
Luddy: "Ja.."
VargasLovesPasta Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stop having a love fued over me!!! If you don't stop I'll just go with sealand!!!

Them: Who?

*disappears, everything of mine disappearing with, teleport to sealand's port* Hi Peter!!!! ^^

Sealand/Peter: O-oh hi, when did you get here?

Just arrived, teleported from Germany and Prussia's house, they were fighting over me, but they can't have me cause I'm yours now
12popscotch Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Bear Emoji-12 (Really) [V1] 
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol i loved this 
SaiyanbadassRussia Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fluffybunny605 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
ooohhh, jeez....
E-Sane Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no. This is bad.
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014

Hmmmm, I wonder what the *tools.* are? *cough*mud and dirt.*cough*


SunlessVamp95 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah, that would make sense. xD
AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
he could of just used some porn or something to distract him....
mangaanimefanforlife Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
true true
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
deathgirlmorgaine Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
Germany, go play in the amateur corner. Gil's got the looks, AND the ego.
DarkEcila Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i like this story. but boys I am not a Prize to be Won! *leaves the room in slight anger and embaressment*
Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sunahra Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sunahra Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Booyah! A kiss on the cheek from both Prussia and Germany, now I can die happy. 
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol what Yui Hirasawa (Don't glare at me) [V1]  dont die suna san 
4everinked Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god! i love it! a double sided cheek kiss from prussia AND germany! how could this day get any better!
shinyeeveelover135 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So bosh (boss) i freakin love it! Squee~ :hooray:
LilNineTails Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHAT SHE SAID! Ifaintplz
LilNineTails Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OTL I fail at these thingymabobbers.
estherbunnyfoofoo Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icon Ifaintplz: (no space)
free7evens Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
i never even really liked gilbert until this day, thank you :)
SunlessVamp95 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome~! :meow:
Madnesswitn Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
I don't really care about Prussia that much

As long as I have my Germany!!! X3
Powerpuffs16 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yahy!! Two guys love meh!!
Which I thought was :iconimpossibruplz:
DoubleMindedDevil Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
:excited: So good!
And the picture is a perfect complement!
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
:icongermanyplz: :iconplusplz: :iconprussiaplz: :iconequalplz: :iconpassoutplz:
SunlessVamp95 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
Me: :icondignitylaughplz: :iconsaysplz: I regret nothing~!!!
Neon-Apoctiliptic Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Kaiya: I don't regret reading it XD
Me: me neither OwO
I love this so much.
I saw it in my inbox and thought it was part 3. But then I pulled it up and was like :iconcryforeverplz:
SunlessVamp95 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry, I feel like I'm building up the anticipation now and I don't even mean to. I just posted it up on other groups because I wanted to let people know that I was still paying attention to this story and that I still plan to move forward with it. I probably could have just said that in my journal but uh...heheh. ^_^;
Haha, naw, it's cool. XD
I had to go re-read the whole thing, so now I'm all psyched for the next one.
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